Thre are no words to describe the emotion in This tragic poem except that I believe it needs to be shared for many reasons , I am extremely move by its content

sorry for your loss

Very nicely written, great meaning!

Ok you get an honest critic now ,

frist ,dont do a 1 bliock poem jsut bad for the reader eye , it make the eye run from reading ,

secind their si no rhyming ,

with thiose 2 not availible , jsut it is not a good poem regardles of the perfect title and the very original topic ,

you should work more on it , i think it deserve some more