I love ur poem, im sorry, that happen to your best friend.

A very beautiful write... very hearfelt..
I love the way you have structured your poem...

good work..

Your poem is well written. sorry to hear about your loss

Even ni can undrstadn teh greif , but smae as before poem you still do 1 block
and this time you can find some rhyu ming between but not perfect in it

i understand that the effect of the lost and all ,
but you msut keep the lines syllabus lenght almsot the same
i belve that person you love a lot
then i would honor him with more work on this one
beccaue i beleve it describe a lot of him
good work
keep up