You are right ... only when one steps in someones shoes someone can understand there is more than a storm hidden behind the outer calm..... Marvellous thinking

Nice poem you always have secrets you have to hide trust me i fell like im that little girl 5/5 nice poem keep writing

I love your poem. every body has secrets they hide and i can relate to that.

I love this poem so true .. p.s thankyou for the comment i have finished it now i didnt realize id get comments so soon only joined yesterday so that why it was unfinished .. much love xx

Aww!..good job on this!
Aly

True feelings are expressed...all girls feel it...good job

Naw... This poem is so sad, almost made me cry. Naw I love this poem, keep writing kay?
5/5

That poem is so me!
well written!
love it!
xo

I read you loud and clear there girl. Nice work!

Really good poem. 5/5

I like this poem alot, it's really good. Keep writing. :)

I loved this poem; it even gave me the chills. I tink that it was ver well thought of, and it is very deep. I loved it. And just to let you know I think that everyone in life has at lease one day when they cant find their smile, and just wants to be loved. Just like the way I am feeling now. This poem matchs me so much. Loved it. :)

Wow, you're good. :3

OMG... very nice... i loved it.. so much emotions...

I love this poem!!! great job gurl!!! i give it a 5/5!!! XD

I love his poem you put your words very well good job 5/5

Awww =[ this was said but very wll done.
5/5 Keep it up !! =]

Loved it... sounded like it could be a song... you should become a song writter lol... but no i loved this poem it was amasing.. and thanx for the comment... i never really realised their were many people who have gone thro what i wrote about in that poem "i will never forget" it was really hard for me to write and i think i've cried almost everytime i read it... even tho it happend like 3 years ago i still havent forgiven him for it.. and i donnt think i ever could.. so thanx. ttyl<3 Terra

Yeah i got u about the rhyme thing, i just didnt think my poem had rhythm...this is a good poem, it could also be a song...which poetry and songs are very similiar. but also different lets see ur poem had

a first verse

a chorus

a second verse

the chorus again

a bridge

and then the end where it kinda sums up the song..
i like it ^-^

Cos that little girl
she's not alright, she's not alright

we all hide a pain in a smile , a friend in here told me soomething , a smile is like a band aid it cover the pain but it still hurt inside

love this poem 5/5