Really good poem and good title too x

The emotion in this poem is def. there and i can feel the sadness that you feel watching your love marrry another.

5/5

I liked the title of this poem. It was interesting and caught my attention straight away. The emotion of this was deep because It got me thinking about what ifs and whys.

The flow was smoothe I like it alot though I found the vocab again to be a little bit too simple for my liking. That's just my own personal opinion though. Everyones different right. I've read a few of your pieces and I must say they are quite touching.

The first and second line of this poem really stood out to me and caught my attention.

Overall a good poem. ~Mel