I love you

Wow, that is an excellent poem,
so much meaning,
and i know exactlyhow u feel.

O I lyke this poem especially the last 2 lines =D 5/5

A very beautifully written poem. i loved it. keep it up!

Very good one , dear ,
i like the fact you got out to dry your teasrs, i could imagine it ,!!
keep up !!

"I am out here tonight, to walk it all away
to dry the teardrops from my eyes, and think about what you had to say
all night the rain has fallen out here upon the ground
and i stand here all amazed as i realize whats around."
I love the start, I can really understand walking around while crying in the rain gives this a great effect. Many can relate and understand the start of your poem.

"i think that what i feel for you is like a star up in the sky
if i don't tell you now, the moment might just pass me by" True poetry here, stars can live for many years and what you feel for this person who the poem is written to must mean a lot. I liked the rhyme scheme in the second line "If I dont tell you know the moment might just pass me by. it flowed very well.

" i realize that i need you, like i need to breathe
i now know that i love you, and never want you to leave."
Again great rhyme scheme. I like the reference to breathing to how much you feel for this person. and I like the use of "I love you" then "I need you" a different way of saying I love you which is great to put variety in poetry,

"at first i was afraid to tell you, exactly how i feel
but now i know i can say it, so here it is for real.
i love you it is that simple and true.
and now i know what love is, all because of you " Sweet ending and it would make anyone smile. I enjoyed reading this its a simple sweet poem and its good. keep it up.