I really liked it, the rhyme scheme was great.

Really good poem!!!!!!!! 5/5

It's sad to feel older then ones age. Sometimes life deals a destructive hand. Even if you play your cards right, you still end up with scars. I liked how the poem captured without needing details the pain suffered and the need to, even for once, enjoy the beauty of life. 5/5

I really liked this poem alot! it was really good 5/5

I too have written a poem on animosity, but this by far is the best one I've ever read. I can relate to it, I hold inside a lot of anger and it's about to burst.. Whoa, enough about me. :P

I love and favorited this poem. 5/5

Amazing write 5/5