Wow that was really good, amazingly done!!((5))

I loved everythin about it..nice choice of words...Very deep and pictured a lot of questions in one's mind..I love the last two lines...they added a great effect on what was the true essence of your poem...Truly a brilliant piece...Your a good writer..Keep it up..xDD

If I had to pick one word to summarize this poem; staggering. I was not expecting to read a poem like this at all. What great imagery! The way you express yourself in this poem creates the canvas on which life is painted. I thought it was great how you covered both the happy and gloomy side to life. I also picked up on the hidden question in this poem that all human life is asking; where do I belong, what is my purpose, and where will I go? You created an excellent poem here my friend, it deserves no less than a 5. What a fantastic read, and I wish you nothing but the same prowess in other poems you write.

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