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by michael shriver Apr 15, 2008 category : Love, romance / lost love
I fall to a dark black pit, a dark and cold place. because now i see I'm not fit, for your beautiful face. Ive tried so damn hard, to try n make you love me. but all i lost my fallen guard, you see right through me. why do i do these things i do, for maybe love, or maybe not. I'm lost and just all confused, stuck in love its a bad spot. so i say goodbye I'm gone for now, stuck in this pit forever. true love is gone, theres no getting better
by sara
Very well written 5/5 indeed
by MissMeg
This is a wonderful poem, beautifully written. I loved it. keep it up. 5/5