It seemed more like a story to me rather than a poem. A lot of poems do that though, so I guess it's just not my type of poetry. You only had on mistake, which I told you about on Gmail, so good job! :) I thought the little mine forever thing was really cute. I loved it. ^_^ I'll give this one a four.

Awww the ending was sooooo cuteee lol

This poem made me speechless in a good way the words you use and how you put it all together
5/5
Absouletly Amazing!!!!!

Amazing once again.keep i tup!5/5
**harlea