Travis i love your dark poems they have so much emotion and words you use make it soooo good and amazing...
Lovely JOb!!!
5/5

Travis you are truely amazing at writing poetry.keep it up!5/5
**harlea

Eh. Not your best. I've seen better ones. I just didn't think it was very good. To me, it sounded just like a story that you tell little kids around a campfire. It may be scary to little kids, but it is no where near a full throttle horror story. It would have been okay as a 'campfire story' if it had something to it like rhyming, or more detail, but other than that, it was far too simple. 2.

I lik it Travis.. vert differetn.. but me likes.. lol.. keep it up..

Great job travis

Sent shivers down my spine..