This poem was filled with emotions and the way you expressed yourself made it fantastic.
5/5
Absolutely Amazing Job!!!!

So much emotion.you should really write a book travis.great job!5/5
**harlea

It was kinna cool. :) Makes me want to get a bunch of guys to whisper it in a chant. :D That'd be pretty kick ass. I'll give it a five just because the way that sounds would make it so much better.

Another great poem.. lol.. keep it up!!.. ^-^