Wow.
That.s really good.

But why a poem like this,
If you & ur b/f are together agen?

AW... I KNOW EXACTLY what you're talking about... you'll be fine hun.. :]

Keep up the good work!

"I wish to flee
from this love of yours that is keeping
my wings chained to the ground."
helps keep the reader intrigued! i loved it : )

i also adored the ending! 5/5 <33

This is a neat poem great title for it thanks for starting that title thing I almost started one myself the other day

Me likey this pome!!! I give you rating of 5.5 yay you! :D hugs to death!

Its a great poem.The title itself contains a great underlying meaning.You have put all ur emotions in to words really well.
Keep Up The Gud Work

Imgery was abolutely amazing.
keep it up x

Imgery was abolutely amazing.
keep it up x

You have a simple yet elegant presentation. your writing comes from the heart. i like your thought. :)

A perfect discription of a person who thinks of others before her self, but one must remember if your house isnt in order how could thay help get anyone elses in order.