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Wow! This is an amazin poem. I have actually written a poem somethin along these lines too- but haven't posted it as yet. I love the flow and the way the comparisons jus give an edge to the poem. The last two lines are fabulous. Who would've thought that once the reader stops readin your poem, there remains no life within that poem. A well deserved 5/5.
And thank you for the comment

As they stop reading your piece, the poem is dead

This line i specially like

Play with your words
Like they touch the hearts
Don't make the words so strongly wrapped
Or the readers will feel they are wrongly trapped

Don't let readers to move out from an incomplete thread
As they stop reading your piece, the poem is dead

COOOOL poem ! Infact you have told all the poets the great hints to write poems in a very amazing way
I liked this poem just very much

5/5
Cheers
Biya

I like this. I think the flow is really good. I wonder with this line, "Or the readers will feel they are wrongly trapped" if there is a 'wrongly trapped', is there a 'rightly trapped?' Interesting...just something I noticed.

The repitition of the word "touch" is effective for me. I also enjoyed the lines,
"As sun touches the dawn
Like morning dew touches the lawn"

Thank you for sharing

I really liked this poem. I loved the flow and the message you depicted. wonderful.
<3Raych

Ooooohhhh i love it:
"Don't let readers to move out from an incomplete thread
As they stop reading your piece, the poem is dead "
i like that - its like a little lesson to remind us all. Great idea - really enjoyed this piece.

Kelly
xx

Very well written..

"Touch it more mildly
Like the cuckoo's melody
As sun touches the dawn
Like morning dew touches the lawn"

^^this is Beautiful...so wonderfully you have hinted on how a poem should be written..the last lines add more beauty to it..

Give it a touch of rhyme & a little flow
A subtle sweet touch just to add a glow
Don't let readers to move out from an incomplete thread
As they stop reading your piece, the poem is dead

^^ again... amazing...

Excellent write...

"Play with your words
Like they touch the hearts"

Strong opening, very good way to start off a poem.

"Don't make the words so strongly wrapped
Or the readers will feel they are wrongly trapped"

Good rhyme pattern/scheme here good work.

"Touch it more mildly
Like the cuckoo's melody
As sun touches the dawn
Like morning dew touches the lawn"

Very good imagery in this poem. I liked it.

"Give it a touch of rhyme & a little flow
A subtle sweet touch just to add a glow"

Favorite part of the poem, its cute and it flows very well.

"Don't let readers to move out from an incomplete thread
As they stop reading your piece, the poem is dead "

I like your honesty in this poem. Very well done. 5/5

Don't let readers to move out from an incomplete thread
As they stop reading your piece, the poem is dead

..I lke tis line..a perfect lesson 4 every0ne spexaly 4 me..tsk..tsk.. nice job!

Hey how did I miss this poem???LOL...very nice and true.Sigh!I can't seem to write straight though.Goin to my favorites again.