I love this one...
5/5

This was a great write! just filled with many emotions. i love how you wrote it the technique is wonderful. a very heartfelt poem. i also loved the deepness in it too. job well done! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

This is a good one.
5/5

OMGG i love it!! so amazing!!!

Wow.
very different approach. it made me think.
quite wonderful, really. i think it was one of the most unique poems i have read in a long time.
Great job. =]

--**skye~