Comments : My Heartbroken Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Excellent poem good flow just perfect
    5/5 keep them coming

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    I know how you feel great poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by He Told Me I Was A Dream Then He Woke Up

    AWESOME poem! keep it up 5/5

    this is my favorite verse!!

    My heartbroken heart longs to be free,
    Will my true love ever be?
    Now all I can do is wait and see,
    will I ever find the key?

    reminds me of my poem The Key go check it out if u have time...

  • 16 years ago

    by homebound

    Yup exactly....great job