Our Parting......

by Salwa   Apr 17, 2008


I never meant to hurt you.
Try to understand.

Please don't be angry or blue,
Just be my friend and take my hand.

We were too far apart, too different, you and I.
To ever make it last.

So let's just say good-bye,
Let's put it all in the past.

I think deep down you know
I still do really care.

Even of it seems as though
I may have been unfair.

Someday the hurt will go
And you finally see

What before you didn't know -
Our parting was meant to be.

s~

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  • 16 years ago

    by I Rita Valentine I

    My gosh! u 2 seemed such a perfect couple....well anywayz that iz a beautifully writtin poem u have made i absolutely loved it all the way through. very sad poem yet so deep and full of emotions....hope u keep up great work. i absolutely love the poems u create!
    wish u bestest of luck!!
    -d

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Listen my dear, I loved you and still do
    And I will never be able to hate you
    Am not upset, angry or blue
    Am not even putting the blame on you

    I believe that I hurt you more than you think you did to me
    So you should never feel guilty or feel sorry for me
    I am the one who should feel guilty as you can see
    Because I wasn't strong enough as I should be

    I thought I was strong and my love for you forever will stay
    Unfortunately, I was so weak that couldn't struggle few days
    For this I apologize "am deeply sorry" that's all I can say
    So as for now I believe each one of us must find his own way

    I know that love is not related to any date
    But all I can say that you came too late
    Call me a jerk but I think this is our fate
    You came back when I found another mate

    Goodbye my love I will never forget you
    I loved you and I will always do
    Am sorry for this I never meant to hurt you
    I never thought I will be a jerk but I guess it's true

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This poem is beautifully written. You got some point in your poem. Some "loves" are not meant to be which only means they were never real love.

    And yes, seperating always hurt. No matter what was the reason the relatioship ended it hurts.. The feelings we had won't go away in one night.. It takes time and sometimes they never go.. Sometimes we just have to learn to live without the person we love.

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