I love it Baby.. very nice. lol.. but wat can I say.. I love all of your poems.. ^-^

Wow bro....LOVE THIS POEM...the words the scene...EVERYTHING...you picked for this poem turned out great. I just gave you a title that might help but you made it more then just that. You made a beautiful piece of work out of a single title. WOW!! YOU ARE AN EXCELLENT WRITER! DON'T STOP DOING WHAT YOU DO BEST!!
I give this poem another 5/5 bud. Wish I could have rated it higher.