Near Me

by RavishingEruption   Apr 17, 2008


Everywhere I turn
I see you standing there
When their gazes burn
You return their hateful stares

You are always near me
Like a shadow in the dark
Thank God your friendships free
Even when we speak, I can feel a spark

Whispering to each other
Secrets of our past
Giggles we try to smother
Friendships always fade too fast

Near me in my heart
Or sitting next to me
We are never far apart
THAT'S what you mean to me...

*I wrote this for my BESTEST friend Kyra. Without her, I'm just another person. Love you girly!*

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  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw its great poem
    you write it in simple way easy to see and feel what you feel,i like how you make it flow and the imagination of your mind,
    my favorait stanze is:You are always near me
    Like a shadow in the dark
    Thank God your friendships free
    Even when we speak, I can feel a spark
    well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Aww.. babe! that is really sweet.
    i like it a lot.. but i think i would change one thing

    You are always near me
    Like a shadow in the dark
    Thank God your friendships free
    And when we talk there's just that...spark
    ((the last line))

    it didnt flow to well..
    maybe change it to
    Even we we talk i can feel the spark

    i dunno! haha you're 10x better than me at this.

    but i think that even if you didn't change it,
    that should would love it just for the message.
    so sweet and written from the heart!
    keep it up babe! i love it! and you!!!

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