I don't understand your reasons
Leaving my mind so full of hate,
Mentally this is torture
My self esteem you try to sedate.

Liked this verse, thought ending was abrupt but maybe that was intentional

I know just how you feel my dad is like that.....you are sooo amazing keep writing

Excellent write as always. I did something
I never do and that was to read your comments of your poems. Its good that I'm
not the only one that thinks your poem rule
You def. have inside what it takes to be a
true poet. What I mean is if I was'nt so
f**k in the head then I would'nd have
anything to write about and thats not the case with you I believe you could write about
anything and it would be good. I FEEL EVERY WORD YOU WRITE. I always want more and
I really don't like reading. especially long
poems but if you wrote it I WOULD read it
cause I KNOW I will like it.

Great poem as they always are from you.
The ending smacked me seriously. I didn't want it to end but the ... thing at the end was a nice touch ;) 5/5