Comments : Denial

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wonderful poem. Your imagery always intrigues me.

    now has chained me in the shadow,
    so I nearly reach the light,
    thus reminding me forever,
    how the mountain gained its height.

    I really felt these lines. Very intense deep thoughts this leaves the reader with.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 12 years ago

    by Sean

    Beautiful, always mate - doubt you remember me, it's been years litteraly :)

    just thought i'd drop a line, hope you are still good and i'm happy to see your keeping up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Deana

    I can't believe I've never read your work before,I'm sorry I missed it,This is an excellent write. Sometimes it can seem like the mountains just keep coming. Excellent rhymes and flow.A wonderful job.

  • 12 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Beautiful piece! truely felt the emotion and fantastic imagery:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Absolutely wonderful poem, very captivating and great rhyming too!! I love the imagery you have created in this piece, and I really enjoyed it. :) Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 12 years ago


    Quite profound and so well penned. The flow is impeccable and your words paint such a vivid image...just wow!
    Well done and keep it up!

  • 8 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Nice write old friend, how are you you doing these days!

    Stay frosty and continue with your writing!