Unique poem loved the poem as whole but loved this part more
"What worth be life when heart be born Golden
All without a Angelic soul that makes it break often"

I think that is a good, sweet poem

Well superb poem ! a lot of expressions , nice philosophy ! weldone !
I like these two lines most , infact whole poem is the best , but ... :)
What worth be life when heart be born Golden
All without a Angelic soul that makes it break often

Biya

This write is so meaningful and sad. There are some touching lines that I can't seem to pick out which I like for they all stand out...excellent.