Comments : The End

  • 11 years ago

    by Sharon

    You write beautifully

  • 10 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing

  • 10 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    Wow! This reminds me of a person I lost two years ago. He didn't die, we just kind of drifted apart, but you're very good at expressing feelings. You've obviously had a lot of pain to be able to write this and I think you've got an exceptional talent. I can't critique this, because I don't see that it has any flaws, so good job! 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Sharon Brook

    Love the way you feel so passionate about what you are feeling, while you write. Its so awesome..

  • 7 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    Truly amazing! Again... just the punctuation to help the reader figure out how to read it and get the rhythm. But, again... incredible! 5/5! <3

  • 7 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Pore genus

  • 7 years ago

    by Amber

    Love it

  • 7 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    In the end in i love this title i love the flow of the poem :)