This is a very touching poem
thinking about all the people hwos lives could have been saved if others cared more brought a tear to my eye.
its amazing all the emotions and feelings you capture in this brilliant poem. 5/5
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I love ur poem.. it made me cry

Woww..this poem is nothing less then amazing. It truly is excellent. its so sad, but i agree with Gracie Lancaster ^^, all those lives that couldve been saved, if there was someone there who really cared. its so sad.. </33 But anyway it was a nice write..All up good job. 5/5