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  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is very sad.

    Maybe my friends were right,
    Your nothing but a cheater,
    I guess I should have listened,
    But I was too caught up in you.
    I guess I thought that,
    If I could treat you right,
    You wouldn't need anyone else,
    To keep you comfort at night.

    When we are in Love with someone. It is hard to see their faults. We are blinded by our feelings.
    Good job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • I eco cindy; when you're in love your blind to all their faults. and usually it's b/c they act like they're in love with us too that we refuse to see what needs to be seen. its once they stop pretending that we start to allow ourselves to see everything that was wrong. and sometimes even then we don't really believe anything was wrong with them; we're convinced there was something wrong with us.

    great poem by the way =D
    keep it up girl!