I really like this poem.... feel the same way some times. when you want someone you cant have it sucks!! great poem keep it up

Very good poem, deep in meaning and well thought out, like the rhyming and the feeling you put into it, that means alot, great job on wording and well written poem, ,,,,,,,,, 5/5 ,,,, your friend Tracy d

Not like no one can see what you are feeling inside it like somebody is passing you by with no touch to say " you gotten me feeling little insane" but it's too true to say it all in ur poem.

I really like this one!
your feelings really show and this poem made me feel them to.
i loved it

I love your poem it's so cute!!!

Now this has you all in it really felt it my friend :)

Now this has you all in it really felt it my friend :)