Comments : Let Destiny Sleep

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittney Michele

    I really like this one. good job=]

  • 11 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    Beautifully written...You are a very good writer....In my opinion my favorite part of the poem was
    "Attempts to flee fail, get stabbed in the back
    Crash to the floor with your life turning black

    Blood trickles out, the stab wound so deep
    Go ahead, fly, let destiny sleep"

    Beautiful 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    This poem was very good strong words..This poem as a voice in it..5/5 :D

  • 11 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    I think you expressed this poem so well It had a deep meaning I really thought it was meaningful You have a great talent =)

  • 11 years ago

    by faria

    Very..wonderful and touching..poem
    good choice..of wordz..
    loved every word..
    keep it up..xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I love the tittle of this piece, as for the poem itself its amazing =]
    The flow was great and it was strongly written, your a very talented writter!

  • 10 years ago

    by katie

    Really good, keep writing!

  • 9 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    I L-O-V-E this one from you! I absolutely adore the use of creative metaphors and I certainly do observe a healthy dose of them right here in a single poem. And I thought the title was well thought out, certainly captures my attention. Keep writing dear! XD

  • 9 years ago

    by victoria

    Once again great work. vivid and deep.

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    It has to be an art to write like you, this is amazing, just like each of the others.