I really like this one. good job=]

Beautifully written...You are a very good writer....In my opinion my favorite part of the poem was
"Attempts to flee fail, get stabbed in the back
Crash to the floor with your life turning black

Blood trickles out, the stab wound so deep
Go ahead, fly, let destiny sleep"

Beautiful 5/5

This poem was very good strong words..This poem as a voice in it..5/5 :D

I think you expressed this poem so well It had a deep meaning I really thought it was meaningful You have a great talent =)

Very..wonderful and touching..poem
good choice..of wordz..
loved every word..
keep it up..xxx

I love the tittle of this piece, as for the poem itself its amazing =]
The flow was great and it was strongly written, your a very talented writter!

Really good, keep writing!

I L-O-V-E this one from you! I absolutely adore the use of creative metaphors and I certainly do observe a healthy dose of them right here in a single poem. And I thought the title was well thought out, certainly captures my attention. Keep writing dear! XD

Once again great work. vivid and deep.

It has to be an art to write like you, this is amazing, just like each of the others.