I look at you, you look back.
i tell you i love you, and that it's fact.
you stare at me harder; i started to melt.
sweating, thinking if you knew how i felt.
^^^
I love the feeling of the sweetness of this opening stanza.

A few changes .... To many "I's"

Look at you, you look back.
tell you i love you, and that's a fact.
you stare at me harder; I'm starting to melt.
sweating, wondering if you knew how i felt.

I'm thinking there's nothing more humiliating than this.
than you grab me close and strong and give me a kiss.
we melt and sank down; you sighed,
"theres nothing better than just you and i."
^^^
The anticipating of the kiss and wondering if the feelings are mutual .... your second line says "yes" and the ending line speaks "love"
Beautiful!

A few changes I would make ....

Thinking there's nothing more humiliating than this.
than you grab me close and give me a kiss.
we melt into an embrace as you sigh
"there's nothing better than just ... you and I."

There is nothing better than the feeling of admiration being returned .... sweet poem you've penned here Diana

Luanne

Good flow throughout the poem, no suggestions, it was all great. You portrayed this love so beautifully and you did wonderful! Cute poem, glad you wrote it!

I absolutely loved this one
you are incredibly gifted with words