by Unamed Apr 22, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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Lying in a field of flowers, |
by Empathy
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I really enjoyed the similes that appeared throughout this poem, and the poem in general is sweet, genuine, and hopeful. The emotion is expressed well. I like the reflection that you sort portray when you mention you are "in the field" how you can sustain the time held there because in those moments nothing else is evident. A very interesting write indeed. Great work. |
by Kianna
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This poem is great...i love it |
by elly
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This was so good t.t |
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I love this poem! it has such a great vibe that would make me wanna read it over again |
by noha
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Waw, ts realy good i enjoy reading. |