Truly a wonderful write. Simple and yet so effective. I love the repetition of the last stanza. 5/5

It's gorgeous =)
You have a real knack for writing love poems, damn you =P teach me oh wise one..

Anyways, it was a great poem.
Talk to you later love,
xxxxx

Great poem! well expressed and really romantic..
i don't hav advices and criticism about this.. good job! =]

Secrets within the deepest part of my heart
I will express all this unwritten speech
With black ink upon a computer screen
Searching thoughts that were once out of reach

You have become more then an addiction
That I could never dream of forgetting
Because if I ever lost you within my life
I would be living in a forever of regretting

these line touched me.

this was full of emotions.

good job!!!!!!!!!!

Wow this poem is so welll writen!

Secrets within the deepest part of my heart
I will express all this unwritten speech
With black ink upon a computer screen
Searching thoughts that were once out of reach

These lines are a real good beginning coz it really guages the reader to your intention.

You have become more then an addiction
That I could never dream of forgetting
Because if I ever lost you within my life
I would be living in a forever of regretting

These stanzas are a good follow up of what has been introduced in the initail lines. The line "in a forever" shows the real usage of what I call, The Poetic License!

The rest of your poem explains and reasons out why your loved one is so important and at the end sums up your status quo!

I am thrilled to read this piece! Maximun credit dear!

Tc
Fsams

You are really good at writing love poems. I really enjoy reading every word of the poems that you write.
"Secrets within the deepest part of my heart
I will express all this unwritten speech
With black ink upon a computer screen
Searching thoughts that were once out of reach"
These first lines really caught my attention, and made me want to read more.

"You have become more then an addiction
That I could never dream of forgetting
Because if I ever lost you within my life
I would be living in a forever of regretting"
Your dedication of true love here is amazing.
I love the flow and repetition. 5/5