Awww well done its good xxx

I guess I am looking for something new,
Traveling in a world all to familiar to these tired eyes.
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I like the idea of beginning with a couplet. (Personally) I would change a little of this'
Perhaps ....

Traveling in a world all to familiar to these tired eyes.
Desperately searching for something new
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Basically your words just turned around a little.

I am standing underneath the street lamp,
In pitch black silence,
Waiting for a car to pass,
A star to fall,
Something new to come.
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I really love this part ...
Changes I would make ...

Standing beneath a street lamp,
In pitch black silence,
Waiting for a car to pass,
Perhaps a star to fall,
Something new to come.
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Omitting a few words gives a stronger effect to the reader.

But I wait for a prayer that shall never be answered,
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Waiting for a prayer, that shall never be answered.

I ' m crying out for someone to hear my pleas,
To take me away ,
But no one comes,
And no one stays.
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Crying out for someone, to hear my pleas.
To please take me away.
No one comes,
Not anyone who ever stays, that is.

A single light,
Dimming in the night,
A wishful hope,
Stolen away by the dark beast.
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Single light,
Dimming in the night
Wishful hope,
Stolen by the beast of darkness

I really do like this piece. And with a little bit of tweaking it will be even more impacting to the reader.
It has emotion and I can feel your pleas through your words. The sadness you feel in very evident as tears have penned this piece.

A title came to my mind after reading this piece ...

Broken Girl in an Unconscious World

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Perhaps maybe a title for your next piece. Hmmmm

Touching read
Luanne

I like this a lot. Sad to be alone in the world, just waiting. Very good mix of emotions and a sort of anger at the world.
5/5

Thats sad but good in writing them down!!

I really like it
and i can relate to a lot of the feelings in it
i really liked the lines I am standing underneath the street lamp,
In pitch black silence,
Waiting for a car to pass,
A star to fall,
Something new to come.
this is something that crosses my mind a lot when ive lost hope and im tired of the same old thing and am looking for something to save me or even just to distract me from life
well anyway
great job
5/5
=)

This is a very sad poem and im sorry thats how u contemplate things but execclent poem tho:) 5/5

I love this poem,though i nearly cried when i read it.really emotional.well done 5/5

Hey this is an amazing poem. i really liked to read it. 5/5