I loved this, you managed to make it convincing and use rhyme well all throughout. it was a beautiful sad poem and i felt every line. the story was so heartfelt but i wasn't actually sure of the ending, maybe you meant it to be like that?
great work.

That was beautiful and breathtaking. it honestly brought tears to my eyes. i'm not sure which part of this piece i connected to, it may have been the idea of growing up or the idea of a relationship ending, but all in all it was a great piece. the flow was perfect, and it has this realness to it that made it very heartfelt and emotional. well done. 5/5