My Words For You

by Goodbye   Apr 24, 2008


I give you a rose
and you said you want a cactus
I draw you a white cloud
and you told to add there flashes
Is it that your mood is disturbed
because of her, Romeo
I ask you to keep dreaming
and you told it is useless
Don't you overreact a bit?
There are plenty of fish in the sea

Could you close your eyes for minute
let the wind dry your tears
let the thunder come out inside you
because she is your yesterday
today she is gone...

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To someone who knows who he is

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  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    "Could you close your eyes for minute
    let the wind dry your tears
    let the thunder come out inside you
    because she is your yesterday
    today she is gone"

    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    This poem is really intesresting... N I know of cactus flowers that bloom at night only after 11:00 o clock n fade b4 morning n tey r d best dream flowers that ever exist on earth, n they resemble lotus but more exotic n beautiful than lotus..

    N A lovely poem...

    N for fishes there r stars.... in d skies...

    Lovely poem... Wished u wrote sum like these more...

    TC.. n keep writing sister Noorie..

    Its always nice 2 read wat u draw over here....;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Aww, such sweet yet dramatic poem. you have skills!!

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