Wow... This was really dark... But no wonder you got praise for it... U've really done a good job here! The first person point of view has been greatly achieved!! Even thought I haven't read the story, ur poem gives me a clear picture of the character, The Red Death!....

5/5
Keep It Up! :).

I think its brilliant.
Awesomeee. I feel like reading that story now! ;D

Wow. This was purely amazing. Your simple word usage and imagery blew me away. The flow was very smooth and I love the story you created as the poem progressed. Beautifully done. (:

5.5
Take care,
Stephanie

Lovely dark, sad, and sorrowful poem...
Wow.. so much emotion in it.

"They hid behind their walls --
That didn't keep me away.
Millions of people died
Every second of every day"
>love this stanza... i like the way some you describe the way some people are so naive. they think no one can touch them not even death... but like you said their is people dying every second of every day!
This poem couldn't be better if written by someone else!

"For ignoring me,
Their lives I did endanger,
For I am the Red Death --
I am, "The Stranger"
>love the last stanza... i think it was very powerful. it just clicked with the whole poem. the darkness of death can never be scaped no matter how much we try..
sad truth..

great poem! keep it up!

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

Girl, you desereved all the praise you recieved!!! THIS IS SOOOOOOO GOOD. So dark and rancid but i looved reading it. It flowed so well, it conveyed the character reallllly well and Poe would be soo honored I promise.
And extra credit? Wow... you are talented...
keep writing...
i enjoyed this read.
5/5

Val :)

P.s. im adding it to my favs!

WOW!!!!!
Haha I was not expecting this at all. Although I have no idea what the red death is this poem really caught my attention. My favorite line was :
No one has ever escaped my touch,
Or seen past my stare
This one reallly caught my attention he most It just so powerful and I can picture it as well even though I don't know what it is about...does that make sense?
Great poem .
xxxxxxx
Mucho Love Roxy xxxxx

I truly enjoyed this. The emotion and darkness portrayed in it was excellent. Good job, 5/5. Em x