Comments : Winter Ends (Haiku)

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Love the imagery in this one Cindy! The Spring tears for the death of the beautiful snow you love so much! Nice!

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A sad but yet beautiful piece from you dear. Loved the intense imagery! A wonderful job on!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Perfect in all it's sadness, sweet Cindy!
    Is there any form you do NOT master?
    Lovely Haiku:)

    Love, Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    I can feel the sadness in your heart through in this piece my friend.

    Cindy I wish I could bottle the snow flakes and place them on your nightstand beside your bed for you my friend .... and they would freeze in time. I know how much you love the falling of snowflakes hun.

    http://www.softplatz.com/shots/15642-src.jpg
    ^^^
    Just for you my friend
    ~hugs~
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    An absolutely beautiful piece of poetry 5/5 your writing always thrills me greatly and in time i shall read more

    Keep Writing, lovely
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is so beautiful and touching, you have said so much in so little words, and this was so pleasant to read. Great work. Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Cindy,
    This is wonderful. I just had this image while reading of this beautiful, unique snowflake falling, falling and then hitting the wet ground and melting - the very last flake of the winter's last snow.
    This is a beautiful Haiku - truly.
    All the best, Cindy,
    Ben