Short but very nice, i like the way you express your emotion. Very nice, keep it up.

"I look into your emerald eyes, my heart stars to turn into liquid fire"

Good choice of wording, this creates a clear picture in my head.

"when your hot like the sun hand touches my icy arm,"

I like your contrast here with hot and cold. Gives the poem depth.

"seeing you laugh makes me laugh, seeing you smile makes me smile"

This is sweet and cute I like it. Many can relate to this:D

"just by your presents you bring me joy. "

Good simple ending, this is the poem that you would give to the person you love on valentines day, or just because.. it was a cute poem I enjoyed reading this. :D You should check out some of my poetry sometime :D

Love is responsilble for many things. You have mention, but a few.

Well done

Michael

I really like this poem its very good!! 5/5

Very cute poem! =] i liked how u told what he deos and what happens 2 u. very nice job =] 5/5

~tia

A beautiful short and sweet piece of work!

I look into your emerald eyes, my heart stars to turn into liquid fire

that was my favorite line. it was powerful, keep up the nice work!

Ashlei.