Comments : Smile

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Strong work, keep on going xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Omg wow took my breath away!

    but fix

    i feel there is on way out,

    and put no

  • 11 years ago

    by Lisa

    This was a very good poem...5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by L3AH

    This was really good i liked it alot.

  • 10 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Very creative, nice work :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    "i die screaming,
    such a horrid sound to escape,
    my heart no longer beating,
    my heart broken and raped."

    I really like that stanza.. caught my attention. The poem was really sad and depressing to read. Which means I think you got your point across!!