Strong work, keep on going xx

Omg wow took my breath away!

but fix

i feel there is on way out,

and put no

This was a very good poem...5/5

This was really good i liked it alot.

Very creative, nice work :)

"i die screaming,
such a horrid sound to escape,
my heart no longer beating,
my heart broken and raped."

I really like that stanza.. caught my attention. The poem was really sad and depressing to read. Which means I think you got your point across!!

:)