This poem is amazing! This is everything that I've felt but never been able to put into words. This poem is great! 5/5!

I loved the form. The poem, itself, made me feel. Very well written. 5/5

I THINK IT IS A GREAT POEM YOU JUST DESCRIBED ME WITH THESE EXORESSING WORDS THANKS A LOT
WELLDONE

WOW!
This poem is absolutely stunning ! It's so deep, and emotional. Definitely one of my favourites.

Aww love it, 5.5 from me xx

Sucks when you have to learn to save yourself...good poem.:)keep smiling.

I absolutely love your poems.

Waw this is such a beautiful peice yet it is so sad....you can feel the real emotion and power behind it...it bought tears to my eyes...Hats off to you!!!

keep it up

xoxo

This is an awesome poem. I've been going through some rough times recently and your poem really hits home for me. Keep up the excellent work, and I'll look forward to reading your other poetry in the future. 5/5 of course, although I'd give you 10 out of 5 if i could.

Take care,
Crystal

Hi am heba and i am a new member. i think your poem is the greatest one in the whole site, because when i read it for the first time i just said wow. keep up!

I really liked this one. It's really good. I can relate a lot. I felt that way a lot. Sometimes I still do. Great job1 Keep on writing.

A fairly good description of depression told through the eyes of another but you can see it through hers too almost showing both sides.
Well done on the brilliant rhythm you've given this its made the story very vivid in its imagery in these words.
5/5