Burning temptation

I liked it to but i feel it ended a bit early

"Everytime I see your face
it leaves my mind without a trace "

Good start to this poem and a good rhyme scheme.

"the things that you would do to me
rip out my heart so carelessly "

Very good flow at this part of the poem. it just flows from one word to the next. Very good.

" take away My love and joy
for i will fall into your ploy "

Good rhyme scheme again. Good work.

"no matter how wrong it seems to be
my heart will not change for me
the pain I feel around you
will not satisfy my hearts view "

Good ending to a short poem. It was sweet and simple and was a worth read! good work keep it up :D You should check out some of my poetry sometime :D