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by Shasya Apr 27, 2008 category : Love, romance / lost love
Looking at your picture Compels that tear to fall Torrential sorrow In remembrance of it all The passion we shared One's craze for the other Forever enveloped In obsessive fervor Every waking second spent In the others existence Aroused just by name Bound by no resistance And just your name Sent a ripple inside That had me craving Yet eccentrically satisfied But now it's vanished That moment, and that age I wish you didn't own a gun I wish you didn't know rage
by Sourav
Hi... I've found your writing is far mature than your age. This poem is very well constructed. It flows well and to the point through out... Keep writing... Well done!