hey wow that was an amazing poem! really sad but it sends a message that i think everyone should hear. great job

... Wow. Left me speechless.

That poem was AWESOME .. I loved it .. and it does make people think a lot when they tease someone ... keep up the great work !

That poem was AWESOME .. I loved it .. and it does make people think a lot when they tease someone ... keep up the great work !

hey girl! that was a beyond wonderful poem! i know i hate to be made fun of and pushed around but i dont think i ever realized if other people did too! i will diffently be alot nicer to people for now on! keep writing! xoxo brittany

I have read a lot of poems like this (on a suicidal note) and I have to say this one really touched me-i found myself holding my breath through the actual suicide part-I could imagine it and feel it in me-I don't know what you did different than others but you have great sway with your words...please keep it up-this is a 10 completely!

this poem is amazing.. and really sad. I think the thing that makes this poem better then a lot of them is the fact that a lot of people can relate.. I loved it.. and you will definately be getting a five from me. keep it up

that is an awesome poem... and its sad how many people are in the situation... sometimes i feel like that, like my friends arent really friends they talk about me behind my back im constantly getting made fun of my family dont give a flying flip about me.... and i jus get down and depressed i know how it feels and it sux, awesome poem

That was an awesome poem, i loved it, you write really good poems. Well keep up the good work, and please check out some of mine

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Wow that was such a good poem, it really makes you think about what you say or do to people espcially since kids can be so mean, you put a good message out there.