I love your use of language and imagery. It's just amazing. Thank you so much for sharing your poems, because that was just WOW!

5/5

It's awesome the wording was very very advanced but i could follow easily with the context you put behind it! yeah the poem has an easy flow that just draws you in.........I have to say this would be a poem that i would like put in my dorm room in college and like to wake up every morning to! So great job! 5/5

First of all title is great, it has excellent connection with poem.

I will tell my personal interpretations but I doubt that you thought about that things when you wrote this.

-Enchanting vocals portray heart's refrains,
stanzas sketched across ruby red canvas
with beauty of butterflies and sugar canes
enwrapped with glowing, pearly sensations.-

^First line is beautiful, it sounded to me that some person can tell exactly what you constantly feel inside. Rest of the stanza is also good, though I personally deeply dislike word -sugar canes- but all in all it seemed to me that with some fresh energy and love someone, metaphorically, paint across you, that you bond, maybe through art. Overall you put a lot of pink and red hues across this, that is fantastic because you can describe color of atmosphere without actually telling it but I personally don't like it too much.
And third line is inserted so you should or
put comas on the end of second and third line or, at least, detach third line of last line with coma on the end of it.

-Passionate kisses form fragrant addiction,
morphing hesitation into liquid lullabies
crowned with whispers of elegant fiction;
hand in hand, pupils fill with hues of fire.-

^Amazingly written, I am actually impressed with this part a lot more than I was with first stanza. It looks to me that you hesitated to enter into something but now, when you let emotions to grow you can't actually live without that. Which I figured from comparing passion with -lullaby and addiction-
nice rhyme btw.

-Entranced with anticipations oh, so sweet,
laced promises flow through the veins;
florescent emotions rhyme with words on repeat
completing soul's concealed puzzle.-

^This too me looks like merging with some great beauty, you wrote this on truly creative and clever way. I admire your writing through whole stanza. And you added great tone with -anticipations-
Though I suggest you to put comma in first line before word -oh- that way it makes more sense.

-Ardent gazes interlock above the candlelight,
thoughts frolic with molten temptations
embracing celestial elixir of delight,
spilling spectrum of affection within zest.-

^You greatly showed growing of your emotions through the poem, here your feelings entered in some beauty which is bigger than humans which you compare with celestial things. Maybe cause it is too rare to belong here.
Incredible stanza with each stanza I admire this piece more.
I don't like just one thing, the fact that you used word -ardent- because I hoped that -ardent waltz- is one name for your -dance- with strong emotions which you described in this poem so I dislike use of that word in piece, you maybe could put some synonym. (maybe flamed gazes)

-Enchanting vocals portray heart's refrains,
stanzas sketched across ruby red canvas
with beauty of butterflies and sugar canes
enwrapped with glowing, pearly sensations.-

In my mind I saw some upgrowth of your feelings so repetition threw me off a little.

Overall honestly this isn't one of your pieces which are my favorites but it was huge pleasure to read it, very authentic and remarkable write.

Wow, this piece is amazing. I like the way that you repeated your first stanza as you last, it was quite effective. The adjectives you used for your immagery were perfect. The range of vocabulary just makes your work even more graceful. There is something about your work that awakens a sort of calming, relaxing feeling inside of me. I don't know how to explain it. I just know that I wish I could put words together in the ways that you do.
10,000/5!!!
~Stefanie

I love the way you made your emotions peirce threw the skin of your readers.

kudos: one critique; great job, but to me the flow was a little off.

This is possibly going to be one of the shortest comments I've left you.
This was a truely captivating love poem. Though there were no rhymes, the flow of it just seemed to role off the tongue. I truely loved your word choice in this. Every expression, and every emotion was beautiful. If I could read with my eyes closed, I would do that with this just to capture every essence of it in my mind.

Two suggestions:

"hand in hand, pupils fill with hues of fire."

^^I'm not expert, but I'm pretty sure "hues" are shades of purple and blue. I guess fire does have blue in it, but usually when people think of fire, it's the reddish-orange color. Hmm, but you could also keep it that way, so that it becomes more of a unique line.

Also:
"florescent emotions rhyme with words on repeat"

^^It should be "fluorescent". You forgot the "u".

I must admit though, I did not too much care for the ending. It didn't go out with a BANG like most of your work does. Maybe if you added one final line, to kind of make the poem fade out, and make people say "WOW". I just did not like how it was the same as the first stanza.

I do however, absolutely love the title. It fits EXACTLY with the poem. It was a beautiful choice.
As always, a pleasure to read. And I am sorry it took so long to give you this comment.
Take care, and keep writing!

~Lace

Wow, <<that about sums up everything. Its overflowing with emotion, alot to take in for one read so I read it twice. It is beautiful, like the poetic version of a candy store paradise. I liked the repeat of the first stanza at the end, that ensured its closing with sweet images that lingered in my mind. well done

Yay, my little not-so-creative mind understood this. I very much liked this stanza,

"Passionate kisses form fragrant addiction,
morphing hesitation into liquid lullabies
crowned with whispers of elegant fiction;
hand in hand, pupils fill with hues of fire."

It's so creatively written. I can feel your passion for writing in all of these poems. It's wonderful. 5/5

Absolutly beautiful. The flow was simply perfect, and just like I could touch the sweetness of the words, and that's what real love is all about.
Loved how you repeated beggining with end, made whole poem stronger.
Wording was amazing, and vocabulary, well had to look up most of the words to understand the whole meening. :D

5/5 Perfect poem.

Wow. I learned a new word today. [Ardent]

Loved it! Beautilly scripted love piece you have here that had me captivated from the beginning line to your end. Again perfect use of words and flawless flow. I liked how this poem made me feel. It was as if I was on some cloud floating into a beautiful place away from reailty. I am not sure if that was your intention but I truly did enjoy this piece.

Well done. *5/5*

You have painted a beautiful picture and composed a romantic symphony in the writting of a single poem
fantastic 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>