Edit:
Second stanza,
And when you fight me your in for a ride.
Wrong your. It's you're. :)

Eeep! I clicked comment too soon. :P Give me a min to finish.

Third stanza,
I would not last to long.
Wrong to. It's too. :)

Other than that I felt the U and you was inconsistent.

Question, why's it under explicit?

Anyways, I liked it. :) The rhyming was pretty good and I liked the chorus. Four.

Good job.5/5
**harlea

Actually to b honest i thought i wouldnt like it, but its pretty good. 5/5