by Jayna Apr 28, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Listen to my voice |
by Allisha
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This is a great poem. |
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I like it, great job rhyming and i love the way you wrote it, keep it up 5/5 |
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I loved how you made it rhyme...it gave this piece a great rhythm.....good job! ^_^ |