Wow the ending was great!
It was sad, but written so wonderfully.
i loved it.
i know how you feel, i often feel that way. *sigh*
well keep it up
5/5

Do you see how badly I want to be a daughter actually worthy of love?! * you are wrorthy of love hun, deserve a lot more than what they give you xxxx

good work x

I feel like this sometimes, like the only way to make everyone happy is to not be here to make them sad, "Did you EVER see how hard I tried to be something other than worthless in your eyes?" I love this line, great poem 5/5

Wow...that was tragic. Wonderfully written,though.The emotion was just burning through the entire poem...making it hard NOT to understand what you're telling the person.Wonderful job:)

This is really good, well done xx