Comments : Creation

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I love these little poems. Haha. They just flow so well, and each word makes such an impact since you're only allowed one per line. I love the topic you wrote about. Which I'm pretty sure writing [wether it be poems or any other type of writing].

    Craving

    ^^ Haha, it feels weird only putting one word, but anyway.. I love that one. It's the word that stuck into my head the most, because that's what happens when I get inspiration. I crave it. It's like an addiction.

    Good job!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by Paralyzed

    Your first 3 words throw me off, though I do like them, they don't flow together like the rest of the words following. I thought it was a good description of inspiration and how we come to it, but just that first part doesn't work for me. Good job otherwise.

  • 16 years ago

    by divine divinity

    For one word a line you choose excellent words. Liked it alot.