Hey.i love dis poem:)keep writing

Good job! Keep it up!!!!

5/5

Like your poem, the rhyming scheme is perfect and the flow is great keep it up

Really pure, there's something so simple yet so amazing about this poem. for someone's who's not in love, you sure are doing a good job faking it;)

OMG.

((how did i miss you had a new poem. jeeeeeezzzzz...))

this poem is so sweet and simple. but so full of like...sadness. which is relatable. which i hate/ love. it's complicated. :P

great job mike. really.

5.5

A beautiful dream it is too...never stop dreaming because one day your dreams may come true.

Nice written. wonderfull poem

I love it mike. when i read it it made me sad.. its simply so lovely but yet it has that saddness to it. its beautiful <333

Wow, so amazing and heart felt. you're a really deep writer. I was amazed by the words that are written in that poem, you really know how to make a reader 'read between the lines' and make it easier for them to 'understand'. keep up thw awesome work I hope to see more of your work!

Mike this was really very good,I especially liked the ending.Sometimes it would be great if dreams could last...excellent job.

I love this..amazing and another broken record is right you did a great job...

Really enjoyable. I like how you portrayed emotion and how you explained how realistic dreams can be, 5/5. Em x

I'm so happy you liked it.
Thanks for taking the time to write

Be well

Mike

Wow. I like this a lot! been there it's horrible yet amazing none the less great poem 5/5!

Oh, this was beautiful. :D
It had wonderful imagery and the rhyming was fantastic.
Keep writing poems like this!!

5/5

Peace(:
-Han

This poem was really meaningful I felt every word. Great job :)

I forgot how good u write all these years great poem dad

I forgot how good u write all these years great poem dad