I like it.

Wow, great poem.5/5

**harlea

Wow Michael that was beautiful, your choice of words leaves me speechless. The whole poem is simply beautiful
Very well done on an excellent poem

Grant

This is a greatpoems, reading it i can imagine purity, great beauty, like this flower at night it close and sink under the water and at dawn it rises and open again.The purity of the heart and the mind, long live lotus.
so my dear poet i wish you
health, honor and good luck and of course keep on writing those beautiful words for the eyes and hearts.
kelleyana.

A beautifully written piece of prose, almost? But when words are this poetically written, the distinction is often impossible to draw.
Excellent.