Jessica-Essica

by ThomasBlackburn   Apr 30, 2008


These feelings in my head!
(This is for you)
I'm confused and I'm lost, I can't take,
This just proves I'm not so good at breaking it off...
You promised me love, was it my mistake?
(This is for you)
I'm no teacher, guessing I cannot relate.

This pain can take its toll,
This shame can take a stroll,
I'm sick of writing this, it only brings me down.

I loved, loved you so much.
You showed me alot,
I'll never forget your touch

Empty promise!
I love you Thomas!
Your full of sh--!
I'm sad and so sick of this every time.
Closure being so far from my grasp.

This pain can take its toll,
This shame can take a stroll,
I'm sick of writing this, it only brings me down.

Your a psycho -----
(empty promise)
Some ----ing Indian giver!
(I love you Thomas)
Liar, Liar, pants on fire.
(empty promise)
I cant bear it...
(i love you Thomas)
More fish in the sea? I had you hooked.
What is it you expect from me?!

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  • 17 years ago

    by StillxBreathing

    I wonder what this is about....

  • 17 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Another good edit. Sounds much better.
    =)

  • 17 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Again, you have some spelling mistakes, and this needs proper punctuation. People look down upon writings that do not have proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation.

    "You loved me clean then turned around being mean"

    ^^Since not all lyrics/poetry has to rhyme, you should really take out the "being mean" part. It sounds like something a 3 year old would say.

    I see that these are song lyrics, all in all, not too bad. I could headbang to this, and even dedicate it to someone!
    4/5
    ~Lace

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