Such a sad poem but very well written. Keep it up

Such a sad poem but very well written. Keep it up

Oh, wow, Monique...this poem is so beautiful. full of sadness and longing and hoplessness...<3

Awww oh no thats so sad. its really moving to read. well done xxxx hugs xxxx

I have a best friend who lost her sister and i know it's hard for her. try to keep going i know it's hard hun. excellent poem. it made my insides weep. love it 5/5

Aw im so sorry this happened to you! I bet your sister was a wonderful person and from the poem you wrote it seemed she was! Beautiful flow of the poem and great job 5*5

Im srry of how u feel

That one made me cry. im sooo sorry honey!! i wish i could help ease the pain that you own. just remember you have to make your own destiney (sp). xoxoxo

I can realate to this so much as i lost a brother but this poem was amazing.. I cnt bleieve the emotion.. you have som uch talent.. PM me if you need to talk xo

1st of all i absolutly love this.
it was very sad..made me think about me and my sister and how it would be.. i know it probaly would be just like that for me if she died.
Great job on this one!

Another sad but brilliant poem, it must of been so hard for you to write this, just remember wherever you are she will always be watching over you....so so sorry for your loss, i hopw the pain one day heals.....I wrote a poem you might find comforting, its called dry your eyes.....

Thats seruusly depressing and you should never quit on yourself-always live for life..it's really rather amazing.