I love this poem. its amazing. well done

Wow. this shows alot of feeling takes a good stand excellent job 5/5

Wow nice poem

The repetition of the word waiting, is a good little thing you did there.
the structure was well laye dout for the type of this poem. no spelling or grammar mistakes..bonus. :]
the short sentences, give a sense of desperation, whicj also was a good thing.
overall the poem was good.

Heyy..
i really liked this poem although i cnt really relate to it. It shows that you put a lot of thought into it and that what makes it really good :).
5/5 & keep it up..

P.S. thanks for your comment =)

I liked this alot great job i could once again feel your emotions!

Love this!
You have put together all those emotions that i think a lot of us have felt...
really good job!

I love it!
The emotions are brilliant, jumping off the page!
keep writing please
5/5

Once again, gud job.
u can feel the longing of the poet..
the emotions are strong..
i understand..felt that way too.
it was a nice read. :)

I like the line:
"Agony creeps onto my skin."

Great work!!

"If it takes a lifetime, it matters not.
Until my mind and body rot."

Wow. Enough said. I love those lines together.
Great rhyme scheme throughout the entire poem. Again, great job.

This poem is just great:)
I can relate in a way
a lot of feeling, loved it